Waiting out a
fire but oh, what lightness it brings!
Working on an
example (hurry up and)--
First entry.
Going quickly in Aug 2008.
Go to shrink
already.
Now waiting for
a drive--
we wanted Philly, thunderstorms and you--
What sounds of
my arm?
What makes us
again and/ only liquor?
The house filled
with dogs and girth,
so we survived.
Instructions for
the smaller trees didn't thrive until
(in the boat
impending snow).
Yes, this
afternoon.
History
(that compulsive
habit),
some window
into,
where a chain of used to be.
Now of course
nicely waited
I'd warmed
dinner & we were looking
(good for
lobsters, good for sea)
Don't you think
all's well? We can't wait;
doing extensive
repairs and sailing.
How close to
horde quarters for shower and quiet?
That has its virtues--getting
the laundry flapping.
Exactly. Weird
tides is all.
With eucalyptus
oil.
We made the cake
to see this story?
This blurry zone,
this loosened, fallen state?
My mind was
missing.
We made the New Year ahead of me.
What did you?
#24 It's a rainy
night (this was delicious, too).
How great is
perfumed.
We had a happy
stroll in the year here
(aw shucks guys,
thanks so much for
cloud cover).
Now I long
for sunlight, for blue sky, and for
love right back
to a sabbatical and yes
lettuce,
still, enough,
to feel sharp & happy!
It's up and back
yesterday
the water is
very far.
Did we feel as
clear as spies in the garage?
(I'm home!)
Bring it in the
new front window. Rain.
You'll be added
at this scourge--
breakfast on the
windowsills, waves shooting up
Funny, that's
how far out to sea?
Phrases in this piece were generated by the Karinbot in What Would I Say, a program developed by a group of graduate students at the Princeton Hackathon last weekend. Designed to pick up and regurgitate randomized bits of one's facebook posts, What Would I Say indexes one's major preoccupations--mine, unsurprisingly, include rain, the boat, the sea, food, psychology and politics. To develop this poem, I used What Would I Say to generate approximately 40 "posts," which I then stripped of excess verbiage and political content, and ordered (more or less as they emerged) in these conversational couplets. To try this program yourself, go to http://what-would-i-say.com/
For more
information on the What Would I Say phenomenon, see Ian Crouch's New Yorker
post: http://www.newyorker.com/online/blogs/culture/2013/11/the-story-behind-what-would-i-say.html
Photos are from
my archives; they were taken in 2009 or 2010 in West Quoddy, Halifax, Spry Bay
and Mexico.
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